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I caressed the empty space in our bed, still warm where once you were and supposed that you were gone forever. Soon my pillow was soaked with tears, my body exhausted by wrenching sobs, and then I heard the toilet flush.

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First weekly competition winner!

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This post was submitted by Sharon Cohen.

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{ 20 } Comments

  1. Deborah Aldridge | February 3, 2009 at 6:13 am | Permalink

    Sharon, I laughed when I read this! Do you think some people are really that insecure?

  2. Sharon Cohen | February 3, 2009 at 1:25 pm | Permalink

    I am so glad that you laughed. I could almost see a cartoonists rendering while I wrote it. And,yes, I was remembering a particularly young lady when I wrote this. She was truly “that” insecure!

  3. Ginger Smyth | February 3, 2009 at 4:42 pm | Permalink

    I can’t believe that you can write just two sentences and have said so much! I really think it was fantastic!

  4. Camille | February 3, 2009 at 4:58 pm | Permalink

    That was absolutely wonderful. Great!!!

  5. Uncle Ladd | February 5, 2009 at 9:47 pm | Permalink

    Yo, Sharon….You got it girl….keep doing it….both your entry’s were very good. You guys that are by nature “full of it” can do stuff like this. Hope you win….Love you Girl…U. Ladd

  6. Ken Ruff | February 6, 2009 at 12:27 am | Permalink

    Beautifully written and what sweet surprises

  7. salve | February 6, 2009 at 12:30 am | Permalink

    Hahaha, very clever! I love it.

    salve’s last blog post..Waiting for the market to bottom out

  8. KATHLEEN | February 6, 2009 at 6:39 pm | Permalink

    SHARON THAT WAS A HOOT, THANKS FOR THE LAUGH

  9. aretzinger | February 7, 2009 at 3:28 pm | Permalink

    What fun – I do know people who always see life’s little moments in high drama.

  10. Heather | February 7, 2009 at 3:59 pm | Permalink

    That was great!! Made me Smile:)

  11. Gayle | February 7, 2009 at 7:50 pm | Permalink

    I was ready for a good cry … until the last. Great!

  12. Theresa W | February 8, 2009 at 12:44 am | Permalink

    This is something that only you can think of… great punchline!

  13. gerry & gordon ruff | February 8, 2009 at 1:10 am | Permalink

    I CAN’T FIGURE OUT HOW TO VOTE~I TRIED & TRIED! ALL I CAN SAYIS, THERE WILL BE A MOVIE MADE FROM A BOOK PUBLISHED BY YOU AND WE WILL HAVE THE SAME LAST NAME! ANOTHER TALENTED WRITER IN THE FAMILY…YOUR SURROGATE FATHER IS PROUD OF YOU AND IS GERRY…KEEP UP THE TALENT..LOVE YOU…GORDON

  14. Mathew Ferguson | February 8, 2009 at 1:23 am | Permalink

    Hurro – you should be able to move your mouse pointer over the stars underneath the story and click on the number of stars (points) you wish to give it.

    cheers,
    Mat

    Mathew Ferguson’s last blog post..The Angel’s Briefing

  15. Nathan Ryder | February 8, 2009 at 11:05 am | Permalink

    Congrats on winning the first weekly prize! That’s a really cool story :)

    Nathan Ryder’s last blog post..Two Sentence Story

  16. Anna Machell | February 8, 2009 at 2:21 pm | Permalink

    Ha! I really liked this, well done on winning this week :)

  17. Angel | February 8, 2009 at 9:24 pm | Permalink

    Congrats on the win!

    Angel’s last blog post..Night Stalker Clarissa-Awakening

  18. Laurie Meekis | February 8, 2009 at 9:31 pm | Permalink

    Congrats on the win!

  19. Theresa I | February 9, 2009 at 4:03 pm | Permalink

    Hi Sharon: Congratulations. I hope RT Speaks is helping you with your very creative, imaginative writing.

  20. JL McGonagle | February 11, 2009 at 1:37 pm | Permalink

    Sharon,
    Congratulations. So funny.

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